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 So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, backups. Freedombone enables you to do all of that in a self-hosted way, where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.
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 So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, backups. Freedombone enables you to do all of that in a self-hosted way, where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.
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-Want to make a community mesh network which doesn't depend upon the internet? You can do that too.
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+[[./homeserver.html][Here's how]].
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-But how?
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+Want to make a community mesh network which doesn't depend upon the internet? [[./mesh.html][You can do that too]].
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- * [[./homeserver.html][To make a home server]]
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-After installation it's possible that you might want some advice on how to run your server and set up apps to work nicely with it.
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+After installation it's possible that you might want some advice on how to run your system and set up apps to work nicely with it.
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  * [[./usage.html][General usage]]
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  * [[./usage.html][General usage]]
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  * [[./faq.html][Frequently Asked Questions]]
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  * [[./faq.html][Frequently Asked Questions]]

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